Moriah Leila

For any new reviewers is this is the old edition of my story. If you'd like to read a much better version just read The Dark Goddess the new and ...

Here it is folks, newly edited. Hope you enjoy! Josette impatiently paced the length of her Father’s lodgings. It infuriated her that her Father always locked her up right before ...

I need critiques; the more brutal, the better.Her father’s funeral was a simple affair held that evening. At dusk, his stiff body was laid into a plundered rowboat. Jo had ...

Here is the third installment. Please, please be brutally honest, tear it to shreds!!! I am feeling a little cocky about this piece so I could really use an ego-check!! ...

Thank you to all that review! I appreciate your feedback."Land ho!" A baritone voice called from the crow's rushed to the starboard side, relieved to see the island of Jamaica ...

Reviews of my newly edited pieces would be greatly predicted, vendors had already lined up to see what they had gleaned from the cargo ship. Jo was eager to show ...

I could use some help developing the setting of this scene, so if you have any suggestions, I'd love to hear them. Also I tried to make my protagonist not ...

Thanks for everyone for reviews!After a substantial meal and two rounds of drinks, Jo retired to her room, but not before ordering a bath be sent up. Jo had just ...

Thank you to all of you who have the patience to read my work and I appreciate your critiques!The fragrant scent of orchids and saltwater wafted through Josette’s open window. ...

The newest installment of my had been two whole days, one of them spent hanging posters all over town, and not a single soul had showed up to serve on ...

Jo sat on the deck, her feet propped up against a barrel. They had docked the Goddess just off the coast of Cuba, careful to use the craggy outcroppings as ...

Jo impatiently paced the length of her father’s lodgings. It infuriated her that her father always locked her up right before they were to overtake a ship. How was she ...